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Care to elaborate? A lot? In what way? I'd like to know.
by throwawayffffas 2y ago
Care to elaborate? A lot? In what way? I'd like to know.
- beardyw 2y agoIf you leave out every adjective they read better. "The walls of Earth’s Spaceport Alpha hummed with a low thrum – the sound of power, of humanity’s ambition made tangible. Rain lashed against the windows, blurring the cityscape into a wash of grey and amber. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of disinfectant."
- throwawayffffas 2y agoHm fair, it might be overdoing it with the adjectives.
- beardyw 2y agoYou can never have too few!