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This phrasing from the home page is odd: > When I publish my next piece I will personally write you an email, with some of my thoughts on the post. ‘My next p

by 0x38B 1y ago

This phrasing from the home page is odd: > When I publish my next piece I will personally write you an email, with some of my thoughts on the post. ‘My next piece’? Maybe for a part of a book or a long article, but for a blog post? The next oddity, ignoring ‘personally’, which is inappropriate for a mailing list, is ‘…with some of my thoughts on the post’; you’re going to send me a piece with some of your thoughts on the post? I’d expect more accurate phrasing from a med student. Edit: tone down the criticism, I wrote without much thought that some one made the site; my apologies if I came off as overly critical.

erhmmmm 1y ago
I appreciate the feedback.
- 0x38B 1y ago
  Sorry to pick apart your sentences, I wrote as if I was picking apart something computer generated, without a human in the loop.
  - erhmmmm 1y ago
    Haha, no worries! You were right to call it out.
Aurornis 1y ago
> ‘My next piece’? Maybe for a part of a book or a long article, but for a blog post? This is common phrasing, even for blogs. None of the other phrasing is out of place, either. I think you're mistaking different phrasing preferences for LLM use.