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Dead giveaway is the overuse of em dash

• luluthefirst 1y ago
  I use them a lot... Next I'll have to write like an asshole because AIs tend to be nice. :)
  • unstatusthequo 1y ago
    Disappointed you went with ellipses above when you could have emdashed!
    • slowmovintarget 1y ago
      Emdashes are for embedded asides not deserving of relegation to parentheticals. You'd need text to follow; it's not just for pausing.