Your intentions are good, but your execution is poor. I cannot figure out what the comment is trying to get across either. It's easy for you because you alread

Your intentions are good, but your execution is poor. I cannot figure out what the comment is trying to get across either. It's easy for you because you already know what you are trying to say. You know what the pasted output shows. The poor execution is in not spending enough time thinking about how someone coming in totally blind would interpret the comment.