Yeah, I agree, the point is basically the same – I think it’s the tone that was the problem. You don’t have to be overly positive and wrap your opinion with ton

Yeah, I agree, the point is basically the same – I think it’s the tone that was the problem. You don’t have to be overly positive and wrap your opinion with tons of fluff, just remember it’s other people’s work you’re talking about (and not everybody is good at explaining what they do!)