I was surprised when I hit the end of the article and -- Semi-kidding aside, I /did/ enjoy the script-style format, the scene switches (though some didn't seem

I was surprised when I hit the end of the article and -- Semi-kidding aside, I /did/ enjoy the script-style format, the scene switches (though some didn't seem to matter), and the scene descriptions from "Revenge" that were so overtly different than "Return". It ended rather weakly though. Feels like it needs to have been wrapped up at the end not "Anyway, one of the many guys we talked about died a while ago. Bye!"