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Well, the design is a little wonky: the size of the logo text and the color of the logo make my eyes look to the left first, but then the size of the text and t
by pizza 14y ago
Well, the design is a little wonky: the size of the logo text and the color of the logo make my eyes look to the left first, but then the size of the text and the boldness of the sign up label on the right also makes me want to look there. Let the parts of the page flow from one to the next more easily. I'd also suggest replacing the "We ... distractions" to something like" with the "Keep ... interest". Good luck.
- viniciusfbm 14y agoI have changed some details as you said about the text sizes, can you have a look, do you think is it better now?
- pizza 14y agoIt's better, but the problem now is that there is a massive gap on one side, and text floating around on the other. Try to put the sign up text above the email address form and decrease the vertical gap.
- viniciusfbm 14y agoThank you a lot for your feedback, if possible have a look again we have changed it! thanks!
- pizza 14y agoMuch better. Now I would make the "Sign up now for early access!" text vertically align with the text on the left. You should probably also use the same colors for your background as you do for your logo, since they look like pale shades of the same color.