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Technically kind of interesting ... but as a writing piece it's a mess of mushy, roundabout, haphazard points. With every line I read I can just hear my uni Eng
by scrubs 2y ago
Technically kind of interesting ... but as a writing piece it's a mess of mushy, roundabout, haphazard points. With every line I read I can just hear my uni English prof in my ear yelling.
- Mond_ 2y agoI can live with that, I think. I'd like to believe that all of the points are relevant. The issue is that I had to cram them all in somehow, without making the article excessively long. I'm open to criticism, though!