Completely agree. The only measurable flaw I could find was the errant use of an opening quote (‘) in > He huffed a laugh. "Lucky you." His gaze drifted to th

Completely agree. The only measurable flaw I could find was the errant use of an opening quote (‘) in > He huffed a laugh. "Lucky you." His gaze drifted to the stained-glass window, where rain blurred the world into watercolors. "I bombed my first audition. Hamlet, uni production. Forgot ‘to be or not to be,' panicked, and quoted Toy Story." It's pretty amazing I can find no fault with the actual text. No grammar errors, I like the writing, it competes with the quality and engagingness of a large swath of written fiction (yikes), I wanna read the next chapter.