first edit: take it or leave it I have a "zero tolerance approach" should be: I have a "zero tolerance" approach. your third edit, which I also don't agree w

first edit: take it or leave it I have a "zero tolerance approach" should be: I have a "zero tolerance" approach. your third edit, which I also don't agree with, isn't quite right, it should be: people who mix up "its" and "it's". fourth edit: I've always hated this jamming of words together with an em-dash: it appears that "job" and "even" have something to do with each other, but they don't.