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Your main title's grammar is really odd: "The collaborative interactive product demos". Straight away I'm trying to parse it. Maybe lose the "The"? The brand s
by albumen 2y ago
Your main title's grammar is really odd: "The collaborative interactive product demos". Straight away I'm trying to parse it. Maybe lose the "The"?
The brand sounds unfortunately like a demo itself.
What is your product? An app? A plugin?
Your logo lockup could do with being tighter; have the "Product Demo" text in an appropriate sans serif to match the icon, with less leading between lines.
"Design and refine demos with your team, in one shared file": this makes me think it's a file (that perhaps I can download) rather than a project.
The "guide" section of your site seems full of irrelevant guides re notion, figma etc. Perhaps this is because it's unclear what your product does; do users use your product/service to make demos from notion (Notion) and figma files? Some clarity here would be helpful.