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Who are the customers? Give us a concrete example of someone outside silicon valley using this. Stop trying to think of some clever way to spin it, just tell th
by corkill 14y ago
Who are the customers? Give us a concrete example of someone outside silicon valley using this. Stop trying to think of some clever way to spin it, just tell the world who finds this worth paying for and why.
Their blog, is about startup life, is that meant to be their target market startups? If so they really should be able to say hey you guys you have all startups, comes use Rocketr for X.
It's better than trello because of X.
The problem you have at the moment is X, it's painful because of X.
Seems like they are trying to communicate what their product does, without actually knowing who will pay for it/find it useful.
Which is cool, just if that is the case focus less on how you pitch YC and blogging about startups and more on selling this thing to people. Or maybe they just totally over thinking the whole thing, use plain language.