"Rocketr bridges two worlds that could not be further apart right now – how we ..." This is also an entry that is trying to sound nice to the listener. Use wor

"Rocketr bridges two worlds that could not be further apart right now – how we ..." This is also an entry that is trying to sound nice to the listener. Use wording that doesn't try to look nice, only give facts straight. it will sound more pro (because shows you only care and focus on facts) also you will get a more candid discussion. (because your entry was candid in the first place, without adding an artificial tone) One of the VCs that I talked to had the harshest comments about my presentation but his tone was so candid, it felt like he is the one that cared the most, gives the best advice, and I also thought he was a really cool person to know.