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the sentence should be completely rewritten: "I enjoyed John and Mary's visit yesterday."
by greenie_beans 2y ago
the sentence should be completely rewritten:
"I enjoyed John and Mary's visit yesterday."
- rawgabbit 2y agoThe tyranny of active voice.
- greenie_beans 2y agonah i just know how to write a good sentence, active verbs are only one tool. you're mistaken if you think the original sentence is better.