The original title is much better for most audiences. It provides an immediate identification challenge and response in the reader’s mind: “Am I really bad at

The original title is much better for most audiences. It provides an immediate identification challenge and response in the reader’s mind: “Am I really bad at [X]?” The edited title is in the language of committee reports. “Delivery” and “actionable” are formal and passive words, without an immediate connection to the reader.