It's a shame when people's feelings get hurt, for sure. But have you looked at the text in question? It's no work of art. I don't know whether the live versio

It's a shame when people's feelings get hurt, for sure. But have you looked at the text in question? It's no work of art. I don't know whether the live version is before or after, but in all honesty it could use quite a bit of trimming, as well a whole lot of editing in other ways. The current copy makes the typical noob mistake of trying to cram every bullet point in the pitch deck onto the front page. This is not someone with ten years of experience who actually knows how each word will help the business, it's a kid trying to figure it out by spending five hours thinking about it. If an intern sent me a "fuck you" message for refactoring a bunch of not quite working spaghetti code, I'd show them the door. That's a lot closer to the situation here... If this was an experienced copywriter with a decade of real world experience putting out content that was close to perfect, your story would seem a lot more reasonable, but it doesn't seem to be the case here.