He's using a lot of very strange wording in the original. Granted I was raised among immigrants in Sweden but the whole appeal reads very immature to me. But he

He's using a lot of very strange wording in the original. Granted I was raised among immigrants in Sweden but the whole appeal reads very immature to me. But he starts out by saying he probably won't have it approved so it doesn't seem to matter. I would have put a little more effort into grammar though.