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What do you think of this landing page?
I am developing a new startup alone. The progress is very good so far. Will be launching it in a few months.
Until I open up the private beta I am collecting emails from people who are interested in beta testing (like any normal startup these days). *I don't spam anyone!
So...
Could you review my landing page? I would like to receive honest improvement tips and critics.
OK the site is http://www.chilledlime.com
(Further questions: what do you think of the idea? Do you like the landing page's simple design? Is the presentation on the right side good? [I don't have a big budget to pay for professional demo video])
Thanks very very much! ;)
- raikia 14y agoIt looks nice, but I would suggest adding some color. Having just plain black text (with some green) on a white background is kind of boring and doesn't get the hype of your startup across. This landing page doesn't make me "excited" to put in my email. Try adding a cool background image and/or more color. Take a look this link for more ideas: http://www.quora.com/What-are-the-best-examples-of-stealth-startup-landing-pages http://www.quora.com/What-are-the-best-examples-of-stealth-s... Hope this helps :-)
- akos 14y agoOh, thanks very much for the awesome feedback. I am now in a redesign progress :)
- superqd 14y agoIt's not bad, but overall it isn't "sexy". It seems not to communicate the feel/experience of the site you are working on. You may want to include elements that indicate debate (either as abstractions, or stylistic images/graphics). Or if there is something particularly special about how you are enabling debates, try to capture that in in the landing page. For example, we have more of a coming-soon type page for now, but you can still get an idea of how it's meant to evoke more of the feel/emotion of the site we are working on. It's a bit "artsy" which is kind of the point. There aren't many details, but the design reflects the spirit of the site. See what I mean: http://stradavinci.com/ http://stradavinci.com/