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How do you say "Tip people $20 and they will sometimes give you what you want." in 2000 words or more?
by jwesley 18y ago
How do you say "Tip people $20 and they will sometimes give you what you want." in 2000 words or more?
- tptacek 18y agoProbably by giving specific examples of all the places you tried to do it over a week in New York.
- jackowayed 18y agoThere's a fine line between good writing and verbose writing. I'm taking a writing class right now, and they really stress that real-world examples explain your argument better and make the writing more interesting, and I think that's actually true. That said, giving too many examples makes it too long to be worth people's time and/or bores them with too many examples that are too similar.