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Since the link above is for the "nice version", here's the link to the more colorful, not-so-nice version: https://okbjgm.weebly.com/uploads/3/1/5/0/31506003/11

• Noumenon72 2y ago
  Do you think it's better? It's twice as long and kind of seems like someone told ChatGPT to rewrite it with attitude but no new content (I know it's from 2016 and the nice version came second).
  • tithe 2y ago
    I prefer his "brass tacks" writing style, but it's also interesting to compare the versions (Grillo-Marxuach is a screenwriter, after all).
    • justin66 2y ago
      > "brass tacks" writing style You're misusing that idiom - clearly the shorter "nice" version is the one that gets down to brass tacks (focuses on the essentials). It makes the same points in half the length.
• patrickhogan1 2y ago
  Its interesting that he doesn't link to the original version in his Essays section https://okbjgm.weebly.com/essays.html https://okbjgm.weebly.com/essays.html For anyone thinking the not so nice version is how he really thinks, it seems instead its more of a first draft and the nice version is the one that he now agrees with.
• rurban 2y ago
  Much better. I can appreciate how I dodged the bullet working in the film/TV business. I forget why I left, but now I remember again. Theatre is very similar btw. Thanksfully engineering is soo much better, SW being the best to work in. As long as you can stay away from incompetent middle managers