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Couldn't you do something like "I did X by YYYing after working around P by doing Z and Q by doing A. Here are some details about how I worked around P and Q an
by rendaw 2y ago
Couldn't you do something like "I did X by YYYing after working around P by doing Z and Q by doing A. Here are some details about how I worked around P and Q and my strategy for YYY."?
My technical writing course stressed that structure should be obvious. Better awkwardly obvious than so subtle people miss it.
- layer8 2y agoYou can do it in a way that works, but the typical journalistic way is not that.