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Meeting. Preserving. Sharing. Keeping Your Privacy.

• _pius 14y ago
  You should work on your branding and provide a compelling value proposition. When looking at your landing page, put yourself in a potential customer's shoes and ask yourself, "What's in it for me?" "Meeting. Preserving. Sharing. Keeping Your Privacy." doesn't make me want to sign up for a service.
  • talhof8 14y ago
    Alright. What would you say about this new landing page: http://www.itimdi.com http://www.itimdi.com?
    • _pius 14y ago
      This is vastly better. My next advice would be: * work on the copy with a native English speaker and, ideally, with someone like this: http://copyhackers.com/ http://copyhackers.com/ * revisit the name and add a logo Good luck.
      • talhof8 14y ago
        Alright, much appreciated!