I don't remember a specific word or sentence being problematic, just a general torrent-of-consciousness from someone else that prevented my own brain from formi

I don't remember a specific word or sentence being problematic, just a general torrent-of-consciousness from someone else that prevented my own brain from forming images and putting things together as I read. I felt the author was really trying too hard being edgy while at the same time not giving a fuck about the intended reader. "Look how many novel concepts per paragraph I can fit!" Huh, ok bro. Might as well just write a list...