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Agree completely, this is an essay without a thesis, or any valuable evidence or argument. This is a C- college essay at best. I’m sad about that because I was
by fhdsgbbcaA 2y ago
Agree completely, this is an essay without a thesis, or any valuable evidence or argument. This is a C- college essay at best.
I’m sad about that because I was very interested in the title.
- danielmarkbruce 2y agoBut, he's right. I'd rather a C- college essay that is saying something right than an A+ that is very convincing bs. A decent number of well rated business books are the latter.
- lnenad 2y agoIt's only "right" because you echo his thoughts. If it were written properly with examples and proper reasoning it would entice those who don't share his opinion to consider their stance.
- danielmarkbruce 2y agoIt's too messy a topic for "proper reasoning". Take is as a viewpoint, not a law of physics.
- fhdsgbbcaA 2y agoAs far as I can tell he’s provided an empty vessel with a smart-sounding, but undefined term, and this entire thread is people projecting their beliefs into that vessel. Nearly none of these comments are grounded in his actual text.
- danielmarkbruce 2y agoThen don't believe it. It's not some water tight argument he's making, it's not "law of physics" right.
- fhdsgbbcaA 2y agoThat’s the point we’re making here: there is no argument.
- danielmarkbruce 2y agoThere is an argument, it's just a little vague and not the kind of thing which can be proved.