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Resolve your ambiguity by replacing the word "This" with "Included under the Total Payments moniker are the payments and benefits under Section 3(a) in addition
by salawat 2y ago
Resolve your ambiguity by replacing the word "This" with "Included under the Total Payments moniker are the payments and benefits under Section 3(a) in addition to any others not here specified."
Pronouns, particularly those with ambiguous antecedents, are the devil's tools; and the portal through which demons are goven entrance to the world.
- tpmoney 2y agoSure, I don't say that you couldn't rephrase without the embedded part and reach the same level of precision, just that one can't simply declare that the center-embedded text had "no benefit". The added precision was a benefit over the proposed replacement, even if that precisions can be accomplished in other ways.