> Of course I'm talking from my own experience, 1) that experience, is already captured in the article. 2) I am presenting specific, different scenarios where

> Of course I'm talking from my own experience, 1) that experience, is already captured in the article. 2) I am presenting specific, different scenarios where the derived advice does not hold. You are reiterating point 1. I do not see any new information being added. Perhaps you can specify what is the new insight, or refinement, in your information.