My issue is with the word brandish, its making it read dramatic. You can't wave a dog around in an angry way. You should also have your daughter walk on the no

My issue is with the word brandish, its making it read dramatic. You can't wave a dog around in an angry way. You should also have your daughter walk on the non-street side of the sidewalk in case a car jumps the curb. Is that something your should need to do? Its life.