Perhaps, my comment is seen in detachment from the article in question. The "blah blah" is actually part of the article, and serves to dismiss the verbosity of

Perhaps, my comment is seen in detachment from the article in question. The "blah blah" is actually part of the article, and serves to dismiss the verbosity of a formal description of RAM. I do question the need for the verbosity of their own. As a constructive advice, I do believe that a visual representation of the subject serves better not only to this context but also to the target audience. As a side-note, I have a member of such audience still enjoying the summer break ... the wall of the OP text proved impenetrable, despite the initial interest.