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Your message above contains a quote, and four sentences. Sentence 1: hints that the quote is wrong, because only corporate writing is repetitive. Sentence 2:
by sebastiennight 2y ago
Your message above contains a quote, and four sentences.
Sentence 1: hints that the quote is wrong, because only corporate writing is repetitive.
Sentence 2: expands on this: corporate speech has been repetitive on purpose since the 70s.
Sentence 3: contrasts corporate writing, which is repetitive, with shorter content, which does not need to be repetitive.
Sentence 4: concludes that the quote above is wrong, because most Internet content (which is not corporate writing) does not need to be repetitive.
- robwwilliams 2y agoInitially snarky/amusing but the post you critique is a well written paragraph in which there is a clear progression and elaboration on one major idea.
- watwut 2y agoI do not think this is fair evaluation. Sentence 1: specified that quote is about one specific kind of speech. Sentence 2: explains origins of the quote - history. It is the history part that makes this sentence valuable and adds something to the reader (me). Sentence 3: states that this is not effective to the kind of content we talk about - internet articles. Sentence 4: concludes that repetition is irrelevant and wrong. ----------------------- The way you tl;dr it, the poster would need to completely change the topic to "not repeat themselves". What they did was saying something new with each sentence, just keeping the "repetition" topic on.
- sebastiennight 2y agoOk that's fair. Your summary is more accurate and gets the GP's point across better. Thanks