George Lucas would probably read them like this: #1: You admire a character for trying to be funny more than for actually being interesting. #2: You gotta kee

George Lucas would probably read them like this: #1: You admire a character for trying to be funny more than for actually being interesting. #2: You gotta keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what got you an actual audience. They can be v. different. #3: Trying for theme is important, but you won’t see what the story is actually about til you’re at the end of it. Now rewrite it so Greedo shoots first. etc...