The science is cool, but I wonder if a specialized popular science magazine of yester-year would do a better job at presenting it? "We made a high-precision acc

The science is cool, but I wonder if a specialized popular science magazine of yester-year would do a better job at presenting it? "We made a high-precision accelerometer that uses lasers and quantum effects; let me tell you everything about it." Right now, it reads more like "Dr. C has this very peculiar quirk when he goes to the London underground. Admittedly, it is not as bizarre as his habit of drinking coffee instead of tea, but going to the underground carrying an aluminum tube instead of a newspaper is just a tad flummoxing..."