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The recommended texts are way longer than the originals. Engagement decreases per word written.

• kamikaz1k 2y ago
  WDYM? The slides? I actually thought they were quite good.
  • FredPret 2y ago
    For example: Original: "Survey results" Suggested: "Survey output indicates main root cause of churn is awareness of better value for money offering." My suggestion depending on the context would be: "Survey: we're too expensive" or "Survey: churn due to cheaper alternatives" which will be read by 5x more people.
    • andsoitis 2y ago
      > "Survey: we're too expensive" or "Survey: churn due to cheaper alternatives" I, for one, think the specificity is worth the extra couple of words.
      • FredPret 2y ago
        It’s certainly better… if you can get people to read it
        • andsoitis 2y ago
          For me the bar is… can people remember it?
• bawolff 2y ago
  Yes, but i don't think that is the only consideration. After all, if only number of words written mattered, the best thing to do would be to just have an empty slide. Being concise is better than verbosity all things being equal, but not at the expense of failing to clearly get your point across.