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The list is all phrased as commands. I can't stand that. There is no one way through life, and I wish people didn't act like just because it worked for them it

by _pius 14y ago

The list is all phrased as commands. I can't stand that. There is no one way through life, and I wish people didn't act like just because it worked for them it will work for everyone. I've heard this sentiment before and I don't get it. If it makes you feel better to have authors qualify every sentence with "In my opinion ...," you ought to simply imagine it there, not force that kind of timid writing on everyone else. Relevant: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wVoQ5jde1yQ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wVoQ5jde1yQ

walterworm 14y ago
'In my opinion' isn't the only alternative to blank statements. One can explain one's ideas or provide some evidence.
- jerf 14y ago
  It would not have improved the piece. Short & punchy would become long and meandering, with all sorts of little details and things to nitpick at and complain about. (Indeed, the cynic in me can't help but read this as a complaint that the essay isn't full of such small things to nitpick about and use to casually dismiss it, as is our mental habit... but perhaps that's too cynical.) Besides, all attempts at wisdom transfer like this have the problem that if you understood the explanation, you almost certainly didn't need it in the first place. You're better off just spending some time in thought about these sorts of essays, asking yourself how and why someone saw fit to write these things, wondering what experiences they had that led them to these conclusions... ... or, more likely, not, until about 15 years later.
hmottestad 14y ago
When I was taught about conflict resolution in secondary (yes, we have classes on that in Norway) the main theme was to separate fact from personal opinion. The best way to do that (according to my teachers) was to ground your argument in a fact and apply your opinion in an obvious way. Ie. I think the goverment is .... because they .....; Rather than: The goverment is .... Any scientific paper knows this, which is why they cite a dozen other papers. So then you can say "I think B because this person found out A".

by _pius 14y ago

walterworm 14y ago

'In my opinion' isn't the only alternative to blank statements. One can explain one's ideas or provide some evidence.

jerf 14y ago
It would not have improved the piece. Short & punchy would become long and meandering, with all sorts of little details and things to nitpick at and complain about. (Indeed, the cynic in me can't help but read this as a complaint that the essay isn't full of such small things to nitpick about and use to casually dismiss it, as is our mental habit... but perhaps that's too cynical.) Besides, all attempts at wisdom transfer like this have the problem that if you understood the explanation, you almost certainly didn't need it in the first place. You're better off just spending some time in thought about these sorts of essays, asking yourself how and why someone saw fit to write these things, wondering what experiences they had that led them to these conclusions... ... or, more likely, not, until about 15 years later.

hmottestad 14y ago

When I was taught about conflict resolution in secondary (yes, we have classes on that in Norway) the main theme was to separate fact from personal opinion. The best way to do that (according to my teachers) was to ground your argument in a fact and apply your opinion in an obvious way. Ie. I think the goverment is .... because they .....; Rather than: The goverment is .... Any scientific paper knows this, which is why they cite a dozen other papers. So then you can say "I think B because this person found out A".