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Great writing is not my forte at all. I'd love suggestions though!
by devinrhode2 14y ago
Great writing is not my forte at all. I'd love suggestions though!
- alanh 14y agoYou know, I took a quick peek at your comments on HN just now, and they are all comprehensible and generally well-formed. This one is no exception. I would suggest putting yourself in a reader’s shoes. What do they know? What should they? What might they mis-interpret? Be as unambiguous as you can.