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Personally I think the article tackles too many things which is a bit frustrating if any of the threads are interesting but it’s your article I thought it was
by jncfhnb 2y ago
Personally I think the article tackles too many things which is a bit frustrating if any of the threads are interesting but it’s your article
I thought it was interesting
- deliveryboyman 2y agoThanks for the feedback. Do you mean I’m not expanding on these threads deep enough? Instead, it feels like everything is a summary I suppose. Just trying to learn how I can write these posts better.
- jncfhnb 2y agoPick one concept and talk about that concept. I see at least three perspectives here: * business / marketing * level design * technical implementation Do only one of those concisely and completely. And if you want to do all three, make it three articles.
- deliveryboyman 2y agoGot it. Thanks for taking the time to help me with this!