Thanks so much for this, it's definitely something I need to improve on. My aim with the post was to be extremely detailed, in order to try and emphasise how m

Thanks so much for this, it's definitely something I need to improve on. My aim with the post was to be extremely detailed, in order to try and emphasise how many different aspects have become habitual. Clearly, the way I ended up being detailed was to use brand names. Now you mention it, it makes sense. I remember writing "bottle of water" and thinking it will have a better effect if I make it more specific, hence "Volvic". Now it makes a lot of sense that I could actually be more detailed in many other ways and still achieve the same effect. This is great learning, and something I'll try and improve next time!