Maybe there are more comments about the inflammatory content than the substance because most of us had trouble getting to the substance. I'm here because the to

Maybe there are more comments about the inflammatory content than the substance because most of us had trouble getting to the substance. I'm here because the topic is fascinating to me and I'm very interested in more natural approaches to landscaping, but I gave up midway through because the tone was way too outrageously aggrieved. If a highly motivated audience that's sympathetic to your argument has trouble getting past your tone, that's a problem with the piece, not the comment section.