May I suggest that this quite interesting content will confuse readers that do no come with some context IMHO, It would be much more approachable if it started

May I suggest that this quite interesting content will confuse readers that do no come with some context IMHO, It would be much more approachable if it started with the section "What is wrong with the World Wide Web?" ? Also, you are casting a very wide net, is this section really necessary, and I quote: """ Java - versatile, cross-platform, but difficult to learn. It hasn't lived up to all the hype that originally surrounded it, but is still important for many things. """ less is more!