Not sure if this is helpful but definitely have a look at your English writing and maybe look at doing some courses or just plain talking to fluent and "snobbis

Not sure if this is helpful but definitely have a look at your English writing and maybe look at doing some courses or just plain talking to fluent and "snobbish" English speakers. I can't put a finger on it but there is something off about the way you write English atm. Also, wtf does Steve Jobs have to do with this? It's non-sensical and out of place. I hope you don't go off on such tangents in your interviews.