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It's unclear what the app does, or why I'd want it. From reading the text over and over I think all you need to write is: Find happiness and peace, amidst diff
by fleitz 14y ago
It's unclear what the app does, or why I'd want it. From reading the text over and over I think all you need to write is:
Find happiness and peace, amidst difficult situations.
At least that's the benefit I saw in the wall of text.
Place the text beside the picture of the app with a button that says something like "Get the app"
See http://piictu.com/ http://piictu.com/ as an example, the "We are the same" app as currently pitched sounds like work, and from the tiny iPhone screenshot it looks like it's a gorgeous app.
- maxgaudin 14y agoCorrect...you need to clearly identify what it does and why I want it. After having to scroll down to see "How it Works" I still don't get it. Change the wording on "Exercises are designed to induce practical experiences of various aspects of compassion." And give me some screenshots that I can actually see. Cool idea.
- mattront 14y agoThanks! Corrected.