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That was my first impression from skimming the page. Now that I have looked at it again, it's obviously not what it seemed to be. The pattern of "Get one, give
by huhtenberg 14y ago
That was my first impression from skimming the page. Now that I have looked at it again, it's obviously not what it seemed to be.
The pattern of "Get one, give back 3, receive something back" is the pyramid/Ponzi pattern. Basically your copy needs to change, it's heavy. Drop the numbered list, get to the point faster and more succulently.
Also, somewhat related. Have you seen this - http://www.iwearyourshirt.com http://www.iwearyourshirt.com ?
- gghootch 14y agoAh yes, the get one, give back 3, receive one back does indeed look a lot like a pyramid scheme at first glance. Copy definitely needs work. I'll be trying some different things in the future. Thanks for the tip :) Hadn't heard of iwearyourshirt, very interesting proposition. Thanks again!