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Hey man, not to be a buzzkill but your landing page needs a ton of work ... As is, only your slogan box fits in my browser window, and I have to scroll tons and
by makmanalp 14y ago
Hey man, not to be a buzzkill but your landing page needs a ton of work ... As is, only your slogan box fits in my browser window, and I have to scroll tons and tons while reading oversized text. When you make everything so big, you inherently de-value the emphasis that large text gives. You also have a TON of text, and I can't survey the page to see what I'm interested in. I'm forced to read through everything. Take a look at these resources:
http://blog.hubspot.com/blog/tabid/6307/bid/7177/What-Is-a-Landing-Page-and-Why-Should-You-Care.aspx http://blog.hubspot.com/blog/tabid/6307/bid/7177/What-Is-a-L...
http://sethgodin.typepad.com/seths_blog/2006/04/vocabulary_land.html http://sethgodin.typepad.com/seths_blog/2006/04/vocabulary_l...
http://designmodo.com/landing-page-examples/ http://designmodo.com/landing-page-examples/
Edit: I'm glad I didn't come off as a dick. Here are some homepages I like:
http://postmarkapp.com/ http://postmarkapp.com/
http://basecamp.com/ http://basecamp.com/
https://kippt.com/ https://kippt.com/
- splatcollision 14y agoCool thanks very much for the feedback - this is exactly what I'm looking for!