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I didn't completely understand on the first read what your app did. I read it as taking video of websites -- which is silly, but I thought I'd mention it. Mayb
by tissarah 14y ago
I didn't completely understand on the first read what your app did. I read it as taking video of websites -- which is silly, but I thought I'd mention it.
Maybe "Pick your favorite sites" is unnecessary right up front? You mention later it integrates with my favorite sites and I see YouTube etc...
- mslipper 14y agoTrue. Perhaps 'services' or 'social networks' might be better words?
- cocoflunchy 14y agoI think your headline doesn't work very well because it doesn't describe the actual process : you say "Pick your favorite sites. Take a video. Swipe to share." And what I would do is more like : Pick a video I've made / Make a video > Slide to the site I want to send it to. Or maybe I just haven't understood the process at all ^^
- MehdiEG 14y agoSame here - didn't get it at all at first. When I read "Pick your favorite sites. Take a video. Swipe to share.", I thought that it allowed you to share videos that you found on YouTube or other video sites, which didn't make any sense. I get it now. Head a bit fried today so can't really think of a better strap-line right now though.
- mslipper 14y agoYeah, I agree. I removed the 'pick your sites' copy altogether - I didn't really need it anyway.