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Honestly the only minor criticism I can see of the OP's writing is to remove things that make it seem more disjointed than it is - dashes, unqualified pronouns
by smcin 3y ago
Honestly the only minor criticism I can see of the OP's writing is to remove things that make it seem more disjointed than it is - dashes, unqualified pronouns (what is "it"? AWS? UNIX file system API? a particular module? all modules?). That's all.
- calpaterson 3y agoThanks for your advice. I agree and will try to improve on this for the future