That part made me think of things like the US Army officer’s guide to writing, and the postmortem of the Challenger disaster. The general sense of how communica

That part made me think of things like the US Army officer’s guide to writing, and the postmortem of the Challenger disaster. The general sense of how communication should be direct, avoid the passive voice, put the “bottom line up front”. I don’t know if that guideline is an attempt to accomplish something different but I don’t think it’s useful in general.