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I agree that my dismissal was shallow. Oops, my bad. In contrast, your comments were clear and concise. I think my inclination towards criticism sprang out of
by lcuff 3y ago
I agree that my dismissal was shallow. Oops, my bad. In contrast, your comments were clear and concise. I think my inclination towards criticism sprang out of the flowery and obscure prose the author used to make his points. I would wish the original author had been as clear, concise and to the point as you are. As other commenters have said, some of the sentences leave my brain swirling with "what is this man trying to say, I have no idea?"
- haswell 3y agoHey, thanks for the comment, and respect/kudos for the reflection here. I do agree with you that the writing was unnecessarily impenetrable, especially for a topic that seems geared towards guiding people away from something unhelpful. It'd be far more effective if written in clear and understandable language.