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I have to admit, when the page loaded it did make me go 'whoa!'. It's like all of your sentences are vying for my attention simultaneously! :) The bullet point
by helen842000 14y ago
I have to admit, when the page loaded it did make me go 'whoa!'. It's like all of your sentences are vying for my attention simultaneously! :)
The bullet point text is almost the same size as your header text. That can be scaled down. A different font might also help the flow of the page more.
The gradient on the words APPS and NOTES doesn't really work.
I would try to include a higher res screen shot too as I was getting closer to the screen to see what it was you were showing me.
Also the Y and N in the logo being grey on the patterned background make it a bit hard to read. I'd say the name needs to be very distinct and clear.
I was a bit reluctant to hit the Try It button as I wasn't sure of the benefits of the app and I didn't know if it was paid, free etc.
I probably would have clicked through to a page showing more screenshots. A demo video would probably get people trying it too!
Hope that helps!
- Edmond 14y agoThank you!! I couldn't tell if the "It's like all of your sentences are vying for my attention simultaneously" is a good or bad thing:) Do you mean it was hard to follow from one sentence to the next? Or was the bulleted list effective in grabbing your attention? I really appreciate these feedbacks guys:)
- helen842000 14y agoI think with the headers and bullet points being the same size it was hard to tell what to read first. Like 5 people talking to you at once, each saying I'm important - listen to me! :D You need to guide the user through the flow of information and font size plays a big part in that.
- Edmond 14y agoThank you Helene, that clarifies it... I'll work on coming up with a good font size contrast.
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- Edmond 14y agoNew & Improved: http://www.appynote.com http://www.appynote.com Verdict?