Is the haiku example a real Haiku? I think it gives you 4, 7, and 9 syllables in the lines. I bet you can coax it to give you a better example, if you tinker

Is the haiku example a real Haiku? I think it gives you 4, 7, and 9 syllables in the lines. I bet you can coax it to give you a better example, if you tinker a bit.