I think that the word 'reputation' is key to the entire page. I like the part about 'Customers Love Transparency' it makes me agree with you. The sets of bulle

I think that the word 'reputation' is key to the entire page. I like the part about 'Customers Love Transparency' it makes me agree with you. The sets of bullet points are very relevant and make the book seem informative, actionable and useful. I'd try to make 1 point not run to 2 lines. The phrase "Master building rock solid trust and reputation" didn't scan quite right to me. I'd probably change it to something like "Build rock solid trust and reputation" I do think injecting a bit of carefully chosen colour would help too. Privacy policy and law can seem a dry subject so it's up to you to show the importance and add the colour of your enthusiasm. For example if you look at a book like The Thank You Economy, a striking colour scheme and focusing on reputation, trust and relationships makes you understand the passion the author has for the subject.