Actually, I was able to get to the Nature article through my library. I had thought the material in quotes was Miller paraphrasing. In fact, he's quoting from t

Actually, I was able to get to the Nature article through my library. I had thought the material in quotes was Miller paraphrasing. In fact, he's quoting from two separated points in the article but has changed the punctuation. The original used a colon. > Finally, try to write the best version of your paper: the one that you like. You can't please an anonymous reader, but you should be able to please yourself. I think in the context of writing about how a writer uses punctuation, these choices are significant.